The meaning is perfect... no need to change the composition itself at all :) One thing you may want to do is to give some more attention to the legs, specifically where they join the hip. Also, he looks kind of weird without genitals, but that's just my humble opinion - you may want to put a ragged pair of shorts on him if you're not going to go for genitalia. Otherwise, something besides carpet (stone flooring?) would complete the scene nicely (the carpet-like texture tends to distract the eye a bit :) Well done so far, though! /P