PandaB5 opened this issue on Apr 10, 2026 · 21 posts
PandaB5 posted Sun, 12 April 2026 at 5:19 AM
Unfortunately, Cydonia won't work on my device.
But here is an interesting experiment:
Prompt: Rewrite this paragraph to make it more interesting. The person, Don, is an arrogant know-it-all:
In reality the shadow economy for high-end devices was huge. Don could make more money from selling one top-of-the-range Squire device than he could earn from his day-job in a month. In contrast, it seemed stupid to be at work for eight hours a day, 20 days a month. It had been too easy, and Don had become careless. He stopped doing his homework, staking out the places, investigating their security systems, and he’d gotten caught. Next time he wouldn’t become complacent, and they wouldn’t catch him again.
Copilot: In reality, the shadow economy for high end devices was massive—so obvious to Don that he could barely believe anyone still pretended otherwise. One top of the range Squire device could earn him more than a month of honest work, which made eight hour days and timecards feel like a punchline. Stealing had become trivial, almost boring, and that’s where he’d gone wrong. He’d stopped doing the groundwork, stopped casing homes, stopped caring about security systems because—really—why would he? He didn’t think of it as recklessness, just efficiency. Getting caught wasn’t proof he was wrong, only that he’d been momentarily sloppy. Next time, he’d remind himself not to underestimate the system. And next time, they wouldn’t catch him.
Jan.Ai: Don wasn't just arrogant—he was a man who believed in excess. While everyone else wore suits and pretended to care about spreadsheets, Don saw a different reality: the shadow economy for high-end Squire devices wasn't just thriving—it was a bloodline of profit disguised as tech. One sale? More than his entire nine-to-five salary. Eight hours at an office job felt like watching paint dry while millions vanished into digital wallets under the radar. And slowly, stupidly, Don started believing he didn’t need to check his work anymore—until he realized that complacency wasn't just negligence; it was a fatal flaw in his code logic. He’d stopped staking out the hotspots, ignoring firewall patterns, and treating hardware security like common sense instead of engineering warfare—and now, he'd been caught trying to sell what shouldn’t even exist in the first place. Next time? He’d be invisible before they found him. Because arrogance isn't just ego—it's the only way to survive when you're building something no one else wants to touch but everyone needs anyway
My opinion on this:
1. I suck at creative writing.
2. CoPilot understands my idea and sticks to it, while making it more interesting. (Also offered to make it sound more smug, or more delusional).
3. Jan.Ai writes its own story based on my information - and didn't quite understand the paragraph. But is much more creative.
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