@Rokket , Depending when Yukito Kishiro drew her, Alita's (Gally's, Yuko's) eyes varied in size, so you're certainly in an acceptable range to this nutball fan. If you're leaning more towards the manga art as opposed to the movie, you might try to make her head a fraction more triangular, possibly by just narrowing the chin and jawline. She also had narrow but puckered, pouting lips which gave rise to other characters in the manga calling her in jest "octopus lips". (Yes, I know an octopus does not have lips. I think "persons unknown" are comparing the large syphon tubules that allow for jet propulsion as "lips".)

If you're opting for a "live action" interpretation, what you've done works well enough "as is".

The following is not an analysis of your project, just a personal aside.

She didn't have them in the movie or the one-shot anime (and she didn't get them until she became the accomplished MotorBall player in the manga), but I've always loved the sickle shaped metallic bands she had under her eyes for the rest of the series. I thought that addition finally gave her that distinctive, signature look, ensuring she was not mistaken for another character from a different property. (We did however see her commanding officer sporting them during one of her memory flashes.) I sure if the studios back a sequel, we'll see Alita with them. Really, I have no concrete proof why she got them. I can only guess Kishiro got some positive feedback when she wiped war paint under her eyes (mud in the manga, dog's blood in the one-shot anime and live action movie) and came up with a reason (metal strips) to keep that look permanently.

Sincerely,

Bill

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