EldritchCellar posted at 10:57AM Thu, 12 November 2015 - #4238225

Cool. Want a critique?

@rokket. I agree. That muzzle flash takes up too much up of the picture and obscures the gun. Probably a realistic impression. I have to guess as no ex-wife has ever showed up to shoot me in the face. I've experienced the woman, they've emptied my bank account and six months later I was still smilin' but thankfully I never got the tattoo with their name on it. All fun aside, The gun will be in more than that scene. It will include a closeup of the smoking gun and other scenes where that cheap gun will be handy.

@EldtrichCellar Please feel free to critique anything creative I post in this and other threads. From the dialogue to the picture. Coming from you, I'm sure it would be constructive no matter how harsh.