[quote Tollaris]Commented on it in your gallery, but will say it again. Beautiful Image. One question, what Teddy is that? I love the look of it.

Thank you for both your comments.

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Great image Kim!

Thank you Paolo :)

 

Quote - > Quote - Here was my first try using IES.  This image has one mesh light with the IES applied to it and one curved light.

I call it Trouble.

You can see a larger verison here http://fav.me/d5t0qqp

First let me say I absolutely love the sensual pose and overall mood of the image. Your girl has a wonderful face and her expression is spot-on!

Since you asked for critique on DA I will (try) to give a contructive one here..

My first issue is with her shoulder (you can't help it, it's V4 her fault) To make the crease on her upper shoulder more natural you have two options. You could apply Mesh Smoothing to V4. Set the 'Smoothing Iterations' between 10 and 20, that will clear up the crease considerably. You also could use the fix that Corvas made ( http://www.renderosity.com/mod/bcs/simpledetails-v4lite/70402 only 5.00 and absolutely worth every single penny. )

My second thing is that I would go from a 2-light set to a 3-light set. In my opinion the image would bennefit from a third light coming from the (viewers) right to light up the left side of your model her hair and would provide also a rimm-light to her entire left side.

This really is 'my' kind of image and I do love what you done here Kimmers, so don't take my crtitique too seriously. :)

Charley how long have you known me?  When have I ever shied away from constructive criticism?  I've always felt the way to get better is to have people who aren't afraid help you improve.  So with that.

You are absolutely correct about the arm. I was so focused on getting the darn correct to fit correctly and placing the lights I totally over looked her arm.  I do have the Simple Details and use it allot.  I guess I can't say I use it all the time. (smirks)

I originally had 3 lights in the scene.  But it made the scene way to bright.  Perhaps I just didn’t' have them positioned correctly. I have the scene saved and will try again with the suggestions you gave.

I do have one question for you. You said you parented the mesh light to the camera so you could look through it.  I tried that but wasn’t sure I was looking through the mesh light.  I parented the mesh to the camera when I clicked on the drop down menu I don’t see the mesh light only the camera.  What am I doing wrong?

Thank you for your input!  *hugs

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