Quote - A Stolen Heart is a good title.  You might consider changing the title of the story to "Passion Under the Elms", give both of the characters wind-blown long, sweeping hair -- change his outfit to a loose-fitting shirt open to his navel: and have them staring dreamily into each other's eyes.  Her with her head thrown back, looking like she's about to faint (swoon -- I think that's the proper term).  That oughtta be close.

It'll sell a million copies.

You know how characters try to take over a stoty... "The trouble with wind-blown hair is that it gets in your eyes just as you're about to skewer your opponent." "And the last time I looked as if I was swooning I was going for the guy's wallet." But, yeah, what does the author know.