XENOPHONZ opened this issue on Mar 15, 2007 · 55 posts
XENOPHONZ posted Sun, 18 March 2007 at 11:06 PM
A Stolen Heart is a good title. You might consider changing the title of the story to "Passion Under the Elms", give both of the characters wind-blown long, sweeping hair -- change his outfit to a loose-fitting shirt open to his navel: and have them staring dreamily into each other's eyes. Her with her head thrown back, looking like she's about to faint (swoon -- I think that's the proper term). That oughtta be close.
It'll sell a million copies.
