Esther,
I would consider maybe her in the jail cell, sitting or arms thru bars. Then you can focus more on her and the mood. Tough mood to convey tho.The cop...at this point isn't really believable and, as Holly pointed out doesn't really add. I did calibrate the crt and it definitely then it got too dark, but as I said, print vs monitors are always going to be 2 different things, sometimes dramatically. If the print is what matters then you want to focus on that. have fun at the conference and on the pic :)

No need to think outside the box....
    Just make it invisible.