I didn't think about leaving room for the title, good idea. Can you Photoshop on the title, author, ect. so we can see the entire image? You are smart to leave room in the render for the writing. I'd still push her over to the left. It gives the idea that he is taking her some place - or he's almost there because he is almost off screen and she is in the middle - stuck in the middle again.

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