Looks quite good to me Esther. Two observations come to mind: 1. The "ticking" fabric on the jail beds looks shiney or glossy, which it probably wouldn't unless it is covered in plastic. 2. It took me a minute to realise that the rod-shaped object on the small of her back above her handcuffs was actually one of the jail cell bars! It could just be my tired old orbs, but it did confuse me for a moment. I was going to suggest bringing in another dim light source from another angle to make it clearer, but I really like the lighting in your scene.      Cheers, Dan