Good points. What would you suggest? I could put more weight to the left and crowd the shrimp with the tenticles, maybe coming from underneath and from the right, but leaving room to flee to the right... I appreciate your suggestions, but I see lines, pointing to the center... I could have the tenticles circling more, pointing the viewer to the shrimp, and the shrimp pointing back or back and up or down... Maybe I'll check out your suggested book. Appreciate the help.

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