I think the upper portion of the mushroom should be much darker, leaving the centre lit like it is. You wouldn't get planes flying around in this...too much turbulance in the air and probably too soon after the e.m.-pulse. It's a great attempt but I'd pull back from it a bit more.... Just my 0.02p

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