I find Incarnadine's comments very telling - it's that 'not very much' that I'm talking about. I'm thinking that this is where the difference is made.... Mahray makes an interesting point too....If I don't add everything the scene purports to contain I feel like I've cheated both myself and the viewer.

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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster

And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...