Nothing personal evilded777 , Your renders are pretty good but it should tell a story of some kind or you tell it in the header or below it. I am a bit confused is the woman with a sword flying or falling or jumping ? And who is she going to chop with her sword ? Plate 2 has more of a story in it but what does this have to do with plate 1 ? You need to draw people in tell them a bit more of the story or they just leave and dont say anything. Or maybe I am wrong and need more coffee.