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longpod
Member Since May 16, 2001
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The biscuits are my first attempt at anything food like.

Hope you enjoy

Any comments welcome

Cheers!
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October 25, 2004
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Cinema 4D
Genre
Realism
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666x700

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Oct 25, 2004 8:47:29 am
I really like the lighting on this.
Great attention to detail from the condensation to the crumbs! Good enough to eat. I feel I need a coffee break!

by OBRIAN Homepage »

Oct 25, 2004 4:08:24 pm
the "table" texture kinda weird and the brownish overall look dont deserve your cookies well...
maybe a whiter plate will do the trick...

by mrtom Homepage »

Oct 25, 2004 7:38:15 pm
I like the ring left on the table from the mug. And an ever so slight amount of steam from the coffee. Was the DOF postwork? Why do the cookies and the mug have real dark lines underneath them..kinda like there was a light right above them with hard shadows? The image looks good, though.

by FSBproductions Homepage »

Oct 25, 2004 9:12:10 pm
Looking good! :)

by Beanzvision Homepage »

Oct 26, 2004 7:32:50 am
Thanks for the comments, all fair points. I'll take all these into account and try to improve the image.

The DOF was not postwork, does it look OK?

by longpod Homepage »

Oct 27, 2004 5:54:52 am
Very nice work.

by LCGuy Homepage »

Oct 27, 2004 9:45:40 am
Well, there`s something missing under the biscuits... Maybe some shadow... They look like flying above the dish, there`s no interaction between them and the dish. Generally, there`s something wrong with the light. I won`t make an _useful_ suggestion since I still have problems with it myself. Anyway, a piece of decent work, congrats for the biscuits and for all the modelling!

by Silgrin Homepage »

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