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Millworker II

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I rarely redo an image, but my Millworker scene was quite labor intensive and I was never that happy with it, so I spent a couple of days and think I've greatly improved the overall composition and lighting. Hope you agree, but let me know either way, I always love hearing what you have to say. Thanks!
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November 11, 2012
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Atmosphere/Mood
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Nov 11, 2012 6:56:59 pm
The lighting is excellent and her pose & expression are perfect for someone who has been at the 'machine' for a long time

by Faemike55 Homepage »

Nov 11, 2012 7:14:39 pm
Very nice. Yup, lots of hard work there.

by EricofSD Homepage »

Nov 11, 2012 7:27:45 pm
I still like the composiion of the original as well. But this is a beautiful improvement. Closer in and the lighting is excellent for color and detail. The hazy lighting of the other works on its own level too. A beautiful re-do.

by adorety Homepage »

Nov 11, 2012 7:40:37 pm
While this one has greater shadow depth I have to admit I prefer the composition of the first one. Having her gazing outside a window where you can see a bit of the street leaves no doubt she is stuck inside. Also in the former she is looking across a lot more of her inner space, which again forces one to feel for her confinement and is a method often used in occupational genre photography to tie a subject to their environment.

by brewgirlca Online Now!   Homepage »

Nov 11, 2012 8:26:34 pm
Her gaze seems to show she is half lost in a dream of being someplace else. The lighting is good and gives good contrast and the shadows have a good softness to them. All in all very nicely done.

by phey Homepage »

Nov 11, 2012 9:08:50 pm
Excellent!

by rbowen Homepage »

Nov 11, 2012 9:22:56 pm
Fantastic realism!

by 0rest4wicked Homepage »

Nov 11, 2012 11:07:59 pm
Wonderful. The expression is congruent with the environment. The angst of lost hopes and dreams. Great lighting and detail.

by castaneda Homepage »

Nov 11, 2012 11:45:54 pm
Very well done, the lighting is spot on but as for the composition I have to agree with brewgirlca, I prefer the first one.

by Kalypso Homepage »

Nov 12, 2012 1:45:32 am
Good light and scene. Well done.

by ragouc Homepage »

Nov 12, 2012 1:48:50 am
Superb! Very realistic!

by odile Homepage »

Nov 12, 2012 2:51:53 am
Excellent! I can see you put a lot of work into this image.

by Roywig Homepage »

Nov 12, 2012 3:57:38 am
The mood, the atmosphere is excellent and the lighting is perfect.

by teecee2107 Homepage »

Nov 12, 2012 6:27:32 am
Awesome work

by 3dpoetry Homepage »

Nov 12, 2012 12:22:40 pm
Excellent scene!

by tulipe Homepage »

Nov 12, 2012 1:37:52 pm
This is excellent, I love her expression, that faraway look is terrific but I prefer the composition of your first one, I think the light in front of her head detracts a little from this one, but the lighting and soft shadows are superb, great job :)

by kits Homepage »

Nov 12, 2012 4:37:16 pm
Moody and beautiful :)

by bigbraader Homepage »

Nov 12, 2012 11:40:04 pm
wonderful to look at and presents excellent

by Umbetro38 Homepage »

Nov 13, 2012 9:18:54 am
Nice render, and ligthing

by jclP Homepage »

Nov 13, 2012 11:33:24 am
Pardon me for expressing a wee preference, just remember that honest critique is the hallmark of respect. I like the composition of the first one better, but I like the lighting and details added to this one as well. I think you should do another one and combine the best of both of them. Your work is superb on every level.

by sigung Homepage »

Nov 18, 2012 3:33:20 am
I agree with adorety, brewgirlca and sigung. I think view from the window at her left was an important element of the layout.
But, of course, it's a very subjective opinion.

by Naneth36 Homepage »

Nov 19, 2012 10:28:02 pm
Great job with this image also!!!!

by loligagger Homepage »

Nov 22, 2012 4:50:50 pm
This has excellent detail & I prefer the color, but I must confess that the first version does give me more of a sense of her emotions & longing!

by Flint_Hawk Homepage »

May 27, 2013 11:31:40 pm
Beyound workds. Just Beautiful!

by Steeleyes101 Homepage »

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