"Friends" - for all born in November - HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! :o)
05. morganahope -Fatima
06. Knightwolverine - Will
11. Jane Eden
11. pixeluna - Jenny
13. hardwaretoad - Don
A tune for you all:
As always I thank Rene for his fine B-day list.
(Miwa & Pippin's story continued)
Miwa: We're friends..we can help you. I'm Miwa and this is Pip.
Pip: Howdy, partner...
Kylie: I'm Kylie..who are you?..
Pip: Kylie? Only Aussies names a woman after a boomerang*..
Miwa (annoyed): Pip! You're not funny..! What kind of ship is this?..
Kylie: A cargo ship with all Earth's species onboard..
Pip: Amazing! This ship must be far bigger than I thought!..
Kylie: Only embryos - but the entire Earths hope..where do you come from?..
Miwa: Another Earth in a parallel universe to yours...why this Ark?..
Pip: Noah's Ark?? Did I missed him??..
(to be continued)
* A kylie is a Aborignial/Australian word for a boomerang which doesn't return. But Kylie is also a female name from Gaelic, meaning gracefull, beautiful and lovely. Hope not my Australian friends feel bad about it - personally I never think of a piece of "non-returning wood" when I watching lovely Kylie Minogue..
A link if you want to know more about a kylie- boomerang below:
Well, still slow but back on my feet again and thanks for your concern to my health.
I'm still working with the lay-out to this story. The light and composition is very important as well as portraying the characters. The funny thing (for me at least) is that the dialogues just "pop up" when I'm seeing my characters. Pippin can be a little "saboteur" in the dialogue but it is the same as in real life, never as straight as we sometimes would like it. ;o)
I try to minimize words and fit them into the scene and in a way it is not disturbing or
conflicts with the image. I'm overall satisfied with the outcome here.
Have you any comments about style, suggestions - whatever - you are must welcome to comment.
Have a wonderful upcoming week! :o)
JohnnyC / Rhanagaz
Production Credits-AppleJack- - REACTOR
Nov 11, 2012 5:03:01 pmby RodS Homepage »
A really fun and well done episode to your story, Johnny - and a great dedication to the November birthdays!
I know what you're saying about the dialog, bro! It can be a bit of a challenge and a balancing act to put enough information into the 'conversation' and yet not have the dialog cover the entire panel.
I have all my pages outlined as to what is going to take place, and a general idea of what the dialog will be, but it tends to change right up to the moment I type it into the final panels.
I like the way you have your dialog color-coded to the characters' clothing/surface - very clever and effective. You're doing a great job with it, my friend!
Nov 12, 2012 12:21:28 amby Diemamker Homepage »
Great scene! ...so this ship is carrying earth's future? wow! I wonder who, or what's stop it?
Like the way you set up your scenes, and for me, the dialogue is sometimes the hardest thing to do! Because at first I wrote it one way, and when I put everything together it changes...
Can't wait to see what happens next!..