I Love You Too Much
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|You say all the right things
You know what I am feeling
What I am trying to say
I know you feel my heartbeat
Your kindness makes me weak
I love every ounce of you
With every ounce of my being
When I tell you I love you too much
That’s not true
I could never love you enough
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using them words got me nowhere with this one gal. or was it just the word love..??> but that's in the past, magnificent poetry, very touching Randy.
Nice work and words.
You really know how to use words to tug at the heart, beautiful.
Very sweet words, Randy!
My friend the words you speak are so very lovely. :))))) Words as sweet as these makes my heart melt. :))))) To have feelings like that so deep within must be a most wonderful. :))))) I wish so many times that I could write and touch anothers heart. :))))))) This most beautiful poem has alot of meaning nd feeling. :)))) Most excellent in each and every way. :)))))) Thank you for sharing your most special gift. :)))))) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :)))))
Man you sure know how to set us up and knock us down. Those last three lines - BOOM!
Now imagine that you feel that way for someone and it is unrequited.
Welcome to Hell.
Love the scene and great words Randy.
Beautifully portrayed... Excellent work...
U just melted away in my seat here lol but i really like this one.
Beautiful poem and capture! :)
Wonderful scene and narrative!!
Nice twist in the peom
Excellent work Randy
Great writen poem and image Randy.
Nice one Randy...
Nicely and finely laconic.. :-)
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