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|Dark and cold
The days are only a moment
The nights are forever
Fire and ice
My soul cries for warmth
My flesh burns from the heat
How long can your misery
Clutch my throat
How long can you suppress my spirit
In the depths of your frozen hell
Paralyzing my ability to create
My will to dream
My trusted friend Mr. Pen
Why have you forsaken me
Was my crime so egregious
You can never forgive me
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moving words randy.
Oh Cruel pen
why has thou forsaken me?
Great poem Randy
once again excellent...nites are forever and it is upon me/all of us once again...
happy canada day...
***chills and thrills***
very good work with words
Very good words my friend thank you for sharing
Deep and dark words Randy, be careful they don't suck you in my friend.
To clear a worried mind is sometimes hard to do. :( I too think the same as jayfar though. Don't let the negative things in life crush you. Try to think positive, put one foot in front of the other, and the rest will follow my friend. :)) Thank you for sharing how you feel deep within. :) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :))
Oh i like this one very cool stuff.
Try using a pencil...The pens only adversary...would be my only suggestion to get over this blockage....(smiles)...
Turned lemons into lemonade with this one. ;)
Excellent poem Randy! :)
You poor thing...lol
Seems like the writer's block is not really impeding your ability to write. Great poem!
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