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Evening Smoke

Member Since Nov 21, 2005
1310 Images, Last upload Dec 9, 2014

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Sitting on the back porch smoking
The cool evening breeze
Makes the smoke disappear
I look off into the woods
Where we use to play adult games
Hide n go seek
Which quickly turned into tag
And we were both it
I love games where everyone wins
But that was a long, long time ago
I don’t even know your new last name
Or where you live
But I do know you still cross my mind
When I close my eyes I can hear your laugh
See you dancing naked in the sunlight
You were so confident in your beauty
So unashamed
You belonged naked in the sunlight

The best part of my evening smoke
Is remembering you

June 22, 2012

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Jun 22, 2012 9:37:01 am
Very touching and emotive words!

by wizardofnoz Homepage »

Jun 22, 2012 12:43:33 pm
Wonderful and lovely poem! :)

by kbrog Homepage »

Jun 22, 2012 2:06:04 pm
Another beautiful writen poem.

by adrie Homepage »

Jun 22, 2012 4:42:47 pm
When playing such games the being tagged is the sweetest part. :))))) Games that include love are the very best. :)))))) Most touching and meaningful poem my friend. :))))) Most excellent in each and every way. :))))))) Thank you for sharing what you hold in your heart. :))))))) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :))))

by Isabelle711 Homepage »

Jun 22, 2012 5:59:32 pm
well written Randy.

by eekdog Homepage »

Jun 22, 2012 6:38:19 pm
very beautiful and moving words Randy

by Faemike55 Homepage »

Jun 22, 2012 7:07:12 pm
Nice poem, Randy!!

by brycek Homepage »

Jun 22, 2012 8:26:34 pm
Beautiful photo...and thank you for your comment at my gallery.....:)

by galung Homepage »

Jun 23, 2012 6:23:39 am
This is different and interesting as to where a person would remember the best part of their life love it.

by dakotabluemoon Homepage »

Jun 24, 2012 4:23:28 pm
sadness...i can feel it and hurting from your words...i know it oh too well...

beautiful poetry...

chills and thrills

by PREECHER Homepage »


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