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vaggabondd
Member Since Nov 21, 2005
1309 Images, Last upload Sep 17, 2014

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When it is quiet
And I have time to myself
I get your letters from my safe

I keep them there
Because they are my treasure
They are full of gold and silver
Diamonds and rubies

I spread out felt to lay them on
Being ever so careful not to tear them

I randomly pick one out to read
And it makes me want to close my eyes
Pull you into my arms
And dance with you in the wind

Then I take another one out to read
It makes me laugh so hard my sides ache
Tears run down the side of my face

Then I lock them back up
In my special little place
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May 5, 2012 6:27:50 pm
Very good Randy!
romantic as well

by Faemike55 Online Now!   Homepage »

May 5, 2012 6:36:14 pm
So sweet and romantic, Randy!!!!!

by drifterlee Homepage »

May 5, 2012 9:13:48 pm
very moving Randy..

by eekdog Homepage »

May 5, 2012 11:14:17 pm
This is wonderful poem Randy, very powerful and it evokes a clear image in my mind. If I may, I would like to suggest it stop five lines earlier. Everything up to that point evokes a defining place, a clear memory of past loves that you share with us to create a magical scene. We are invited to be observers of a moment and no more need be said to envision the depth of the bond.

by brewgirlca Online Now!   Homepage »

May 5, 2012 11:47:03 pm
Thank you my friend I do like it better without the last 5 lines. it reads smoother and it still brings across what I want to convey :)

by vaggabondd Homepage »

May 6, 2012 1:22:54 am
Super poem.

by jayfar Homepage »

May 6, 2012 3:51:53 am
beautiful!!!

by angora Homepage »

May 6, 2012 6:09:37 am
I like it just the way it is awesome stuff my friend and u are an inspirational writer.

by dakotabluemoon Homepage »

May 6, 2012 10:30:39 am
Excellent Randy and I agree with brewgirlca

by Merrylee Homepage »

May 6, 2012 11:49:23 am
Very romantic poem, beautifully done! :)

by kbrog Homepage »

May 6, 2012 1:19:40 pm
very lovely poem

by jocko500 Homepage »

May 6, 2012 2:40:34 pm
Beautiful romantic poem Randy.

by adrie Homepage »

May 6, 2012 9:57:11 pm
Letters from the past just have a way of warming ones heart. :))) Reading about how careful you are with the letters makes me think you treat all relationships in your life just as carefully. :)))) Beautiful poem my friend. :)) Thank you for sharing. :)))) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :)))

by Isabelle711 Homepage »

May 8, 2012 7:41:04 am
lovely and romantic indeed !

by Feliciti Homepage »

May 10, 2012 1:00:59 am
Very beautiful and romantic Randy, sweet work!

by mgtcs Homepage »

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