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I Have To Hold On

Member Since Nov 21, 2005
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Slowly the night creeps into my soul
The grim reaper is tapping at my window
Its not his time to go to work
Unless I let him in early
There is a great sickness
That is trying to over take me
My lungs burn with fire
My brain pounds from within
And my eyes
My eyes are so tired
But I cannot give up yet
I have unfinished business
And if I don’t complete it
My soul will forever be trapped
In the in between
In between here and there
So I have to hold on
Until I can reach out
With my finger tips
And touch your face

I am fighting the flu and I am getting better but I can’t help myself I have to be over dramatic lol. My kids call me a drama queen. Lol. I sure liked it better when they were young enough I could take them hahaha. I hope everyone likes my touch on the dark side as I try and get to feeling better.

Thanks for everything

February 12, 2012

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Feb 12, 2012 11:44:51 am
Brilhante poema meu amigo, intenso, aplausos (5)
PS: pensamentos para que se recupere logo

by flaviok Homepage »

Feb 12, 2012 11:46:10 am
Very good prose Randy
I hope you recover soon

by Faemike55 Homepage »

Feb 12, 2012 11:47:41 am
super poetry Randy, well done and gety well soon.

by eekdog Homepage »

Feb 12, 2012 12:19:18 pm
hope you feeling well soon !! beautiful poem !!

by Feliciti Homepage »

Feb 12, 2012 12:26:48 pm
Yep, sounds like the flu to me. Vivid description of your struggle. Hot tea with honey and a little rum and chicken soup. If it doesn't make you better at least, with the rum, you won't care.

by wysiwig Homepage »

Feb 12, 2012 12:31:17 pm
It is a great and powerful work, perhaps overstated for a common flu but with the Bird flu on the horizon it may soon not be. Then as the reaper takes his toll, we will look on this as prophetic.

by brewgirlca Online Now!   Homepage »

Feb 12, 2012 12:58:04 pm
HOpe you feel better Randy. Your poem touched me because my mother is dying right now, so I am very afraid.

by drifterlee Homepage »

Feb 12, 2012 1:00:51 pm
Amazing description, superb writing Randy, hope you feel better soon!

by mgtcs Homepage »

Feb 12, 2012 1:35:17 pm
VB: HELLO! .... Take TWO 'asprin' and call TallPockets in the mornin' - SMILES.

by TallPockets Homepage »

Feb 12, 2012 1:40:19 pm
Get well soon my friend!!!

by West_coaster07 Homepage »

Feb 12, 2012 6:18:28 pm
this is cool

by jocko500 Homepage »

Feb 13, 2012 3:47:17 am
Beautiful poem Randy, and i hope you will feel better soon my friend.

by adrie Homepage »

Feb 13, 2012 6:50:49 am
Hope u get to feeling better my friend but u should take a flu shot to prevent that it does help so do u need me to be ur nurse lol.Great writing as always.

by dakotabluemoon Homepage »

Feb 13, 2012 12:17:16 pm
Fantastic work with this overly dramatic poem! ;D

Hope you feel better soon! :)

by kbrog Homepage »

Feb 14, 2012 5:32:02 pm

All of that because of the niffels, feeling sorry for yourself again.So you'll be back to work next week uh! I guess the flu shot didn't work.

by rickp98908 Homepage »

Feb 17, 2012 5:57:33 am
Wow, you had me scared for a sec, sure glad you added it was just the in any case I hope you're close to getting over it... very well written Randy

by gypsyflame Homepage »


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