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I Had A Dream Last Night

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I had a dream last night
There were thousands of bodies
Walking around bumping into each other
Because they had no eyes
Their eyes were taken away
Because when they could see
They had no vision
They had a voice
But all they could do was moan
Because when they could speak
They never had anything to say
Now they moan because of their pain
They were hungry
Hungry for salvation
But there was nothing left on the plate
Because when it was time to come in
They were too late
The scary thing is
The one in the middle
I recognized his face

This is a little darker than my poem yesterday lol. I wanted to write something so I put on a little music and this is what I came up with. The song that I listened to that put me in mood was â mad world by Gary Jules â if you want to try and write something gloomy I highly recommend this one. It works for me ha ha. Thanks for everything. I hope you like my poem

January 15, 2012
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Jan 15, 2012 10:29:40 am
Very cool work
I can just picture all this happening

by Faemike55 Homepage »

Jan 15, 2012 10:34:46 am
How meu amigo, o sentido da poesia mais profunda, que só um verdadeiro poeta pode revelar¨
" Their eyes were taken away
Because when they could see
That had no vision "...

Se pelo menos erem se derem conta, do que não vêem, não ouvem e não dizem, o amor e interior da alma humana.

Brilhante, perfeito, aplausos mil

How my friend, the deeper sense of poetry, that only a true poet can reveal ¨
"Their eyes were taken away
Because when they could see
That had no vision "...

If at least erred if realize, than don't see, don't hear and not say, love and the interior of the human soul.

Brilliant, perfect, applause thousand

by flaviok Homepage »

Jan 15, 2012 11:22:36 am
i like it :) and know this song too !! really great done !!

by Feliciti Homepage »

Jan 15, 2012 11:28:15 am
Excellent poetry... thank you for sharing.

by barryjeffer Homepage »

Jan 15, 2012 11:44:03 am

by alessimarco Homepage »

Jan 15, 2012 12:06:16 pm
i had a dream the night before the broncos won, so much for my dreams, but yours sound scarry Randy, gripping and well written.

by eekdog Homepage »

Jan 15, 2012 12:28:24 pm
Dark word's are easier to write the easier cheerful one's.
But if we don't write about the dark as well as the light we would be lying to ourselves.
And i like what you wrote.......

by BIPOLARTWO Homepage »

Jan 15, 2012 12:59:43 pm
It fits for the time we are in. ;)

Great poem! :)

by kbrog Homepage »

Jan 15, 2012 2:02:29 pm
Terrific poem, Randy!!

by brycek Homepage »

Jan 15, 2012 2:35:37 pm
Very dark poen but cool!

by drifterlee Homepage »

Jan 15, 2012 2:44:17 pm
Creepy dark writen poem Randy.

by adrie Homepage »

Jan 15, 2012 4:55:44 pm
cool story

by jocko500 Homepage »

Jan 16, 2012 1:33:54 am
This works on any number of levels, both political and religious. There are none so blind as those who will not see.

by wysiwig Homepage »

Jan 16, 2012 6:15:46 am
Excellent work and words to doom and gloom.

by dakotabluemoon Homepage »

Jan 18, 2012 10:56:01 pm
Marvelous poem my friend, excellent theme, superbly done!

by mgtcs Homepage »

Jan 19, 2012 10:15:37 pm

by Merrylee Homepage »

Jan 20, 2012 12:24:35 pm
Simply great! These lines are about us - poor human beings trying to survive in this absolutely alienated and hostile world. We pretend we cannot see things, we pretend we do not have voices..

by velleman Homepage »


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