I am going to tell a few secrets tonight. Almost everything puts a poem in my heart. It can be something as simple as seeing a leaf fall from a tree or seeing the look on someone’s face in a crowd and any pretty girl will certainly put a poem in my heart. Lol. When I write a poem it comes on me very fast and if I don’t write it down soon it is gone. Now when I do write a poem usually by the next morning I couldn’t hardly tell you what it was even about. Most of the time I don’t even remember how to repeat a line of it unless I am reading it. Now I do think my poems are a reflection of what I am feeling at the time, I will be honest I am a very emotional person. And I tend to over write, I am sure my Lizzi wishes I was near as romantic as I write lol. And I promise you that I am not near as depressed as my depressing poems seem. I guess what I am really trying to say my friends is don’t worry about me. Even though sometimes I may think stupid I would never think of doing anything stupid lol.
Thank you so much for all of your wonderful comments and thoughts that you send to me
Nov 3, 2011 6:11:49 amby Isabelle711 Homepage »
Thank you for helping us understand. :)) The last poem may have made all of us worry, but if we all didn't care we wouldn't have commented like we did. I am happy to know that all it fine. :)))) This poem is very beautiful and I love the excellent image. :)))) Thank you for sharing this beauty both in poem and image. :)))) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :)))))
Nov 3, 2011 6:12:03 amby flaviok Homepage »
é assim meu caro amigo, comigo o processo é muito semelhante de escrever poemas, de alguma forma algo num momento toca e se não for anotado a essência pode se perder aquele momento único. Nunca quer dizer que estamos deprimidos pois as vezes é só uma tradução de sentimentos de outros.
Sensível e profundo, combinado com uma imagem maravilhosa, aplausos (5)
so my dear friend, to me the process is much like writing poems, somehow something comes at a time and if not the essence can be noted that single moment to lose. Never want to say that we are depressed because sometimes it's just a translation of feelings of others.
Sensitive and deep, combined with a wonderful image, applause (5)
Nov 3, 2011 8:43:34 amby Rainastorm Homepage »
Randy the best thing about your poems is that they come from your heart, I like that. I love reading what you write...I also can relate...if I think of a line, verse, whatever I HAVE to write it down right there and then or its gone. And I mean gone forever. I thought I was the only person on earth that did this...thank you for making me see I am not. lol Keep up the awesome work my friend. I still like the other poem you wrote the other day best. Take care, Rose
P.S. Lizzie your lucky to have such a romantic man in your life. Relationships need more romance today
Nov 4, 2011 1:52:57 pmby myrrhluz Homepage »
Beautiful image and poem! I love the calmness of the scene. The sky and water seem to be joined in silent contemplation. I get the same feel from the words. A connection that is gentle and reflective.
Wonderful to get an insight into how you work and reassurance that the depression seen in your darker poems is, at least in part, hyperbole. :)
Nov 5, 2011 5:41:30 pmby wysiwig Homepage »
Zen and the art of writing poetry.
This brought to mind a song by ELO.
Hold on tight to your dream
Hold on tight to your dream
When you see your ship go sailing
When you feel your heart is breaking
Hold on tight to your dream.
Wonderful poem and thanks for the clarification.