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Aranée 64: Intervention

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"Alright, Grigham. Scouting. For what- and for whom?"

"A safe place for my family." She arched a brow and he shrugged. "Greeners kill deserters... and their families."

"Then why did you leave?"

An odd look crossed his face. "Your Grace, it may be difficult. But think back to the fight and all may be clear."

Unbidden images flashed as the room spun about her: The clearing... a raider aiming his crossbow... the powerful bolt tearing into her upper thigh, slamming her to the ground... recharging another bolt, aiming again... a sword erupting from his chest in a spray of gore... and a Greener... this... this... Grigham... eyes locked with hers, backing into the woods with a crimson blade.

She sat heavily. "You were there. You... saved me." Silence fell as tension evaporated. "W-Why?"

He took a deep breath. "You were with child. All I could see was my own pregnant wife in your place. I thought of her, my two precious little girls. I could no longer bear what they do to women." His eyes held hers. "You are queen - do with me as you will. But I beg of you: Protect my family."

TO BE CONTINUED!


View episodes in sequence for the entire story, links below.

EDIT: If you read the comments below you see a mix of desire for a slightly different image. I satisfied that with the next image, but then people were distraught about messed up story continuity. So accordingly, I broke the original chapter into two new chapters that match the images. Voilà - everybody got the image they wanted and now the story has proper continuity again.

Please leave a comment or suggestions, your words energize me...

FIRST CHAPTER -:- NEXT:  Taking the Reins -:- PREVIOUSLY: The Turncoat

Image and story © 2011 by Larry Hodge
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Oct 22, 2011 3:05:49 am
Oh, man. That's gonna' leave a mark! ;)

by Savage_dragon Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 3:08:09 am
it's past my bed time, I'm sleepy, not alert, and... almost missed the guys standing in the trees - when I noticed them, I thought is was cool.

by mikeerson Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 3:25:25 am
This is a great scene, love that POV...

by machobubba Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 5:33:35 am
Imagem magnifica, assim como a brilhante história, aplausos (5)

by flaviok Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 7:41:43 am
I love your writing, and great forest scene here. The light is very well done. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)

by FaeMoon Online Now!   Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 7:59:25 am
BRILLIANT ON ALL FRONTS!

by ToniDunlap Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 8:30:25 am
Cool job once again Larry, love the pov here

by magnus073 Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 9:05:32 am
This is exceptionally well done on several counts. Firstly of course the perfect perspective that encompasses her point of view, the hand naturally reaching to her wounded leg, the realistic blood.
The story itself flows smooth and ends with twist as Aranee asserts herself in a way that is not at all expected.

by brewgirlca Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 9:15:26 am
Interesting PoV for the image and great storyline! I kinda wish the image also showed Aranée in the final pose you described too....wonderfully done all round!

by PhilW Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 9:37:02 am
Brilliant oh my god just an amazing scene the pov is superb !!

by Bossie_Boots Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 9:55:40 am
All Right!!!!!!!
I agree with PhilW that an image of the final scene would be outstanding

by Faemike55 Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 10:21:29 am
Way to go!! Excellent chapter and great illustration! I love the pov, but most of all I love her courage!

by Cimaira Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 10:52:20 am
wow! this is REALY OUTSTANDING work Larry,excellent POV and amazing story..

by Minda Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 11:21:44 am
I love how this is going and the scene is beautiful. Have a minor quibble though: What became of Lord Jobil, and I hope you can bring Galen back somehow.

by jandunne Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 11:35:20 am
excellent point of view great render!

by Kindredsoul Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 11:37:36 am
Really fantastic chapter. The illustration is especially effective in it point of view. Great writing and this seema a pivotal moment in Aranee's outlook. Exciting things to come I bet. Excellent work.

by adorety Homepage »

Oct 22, 2011 5:33:39 pm
WRT Jan's question: Your are exactly right - Lord Jobil has been busy too, will return in chapter 66 to bring us up to date with what has been going on with him and Jobil City.

by NetWorthy Homepage »

Oct 23, 2011 12:36:53 am
Splendid image and story, very well done!

by mgtcs Homepage »

Oct 23, 2011 7:34:04 am
Wonderful!

by fallen21 Homepage »

Oct 23, 2011 9:26:07 am
ah! fantastic...i can imagne all her movements!!!

by mininessie Homepage »

Oct 23, 2011 10:31:00 am
beau travail!

by jmb007 Online Now!   Homepage »

Oct 23, 2011 11:08:08 pm
I am sorry you are having so much trouble with the scene, but this is an excellent fall back plan. I like the perspective and the feeling of knowing what will happen next with the two men in the trees. Your writing is very descriptive and I could see in my mind the scene in the indoor setting. I like the change in Aranée. It seems she has found something to bring her out of her depression. The fugitives will be a very interesting addition to the story. While there is always the danger of spies among them, their loyalty as a group will be very likely to become quickly and fervently Aranée's. They will help police themselves from any of their number who would do her harm. I look forward to the further developments with great anticipation. Excellent narrative and image!

by myrrhluz Homepage »

Oct 28, 2011 8:29:09 am
Superbly super image, fantastic plot, creative expressive POV, and the forest and those guys are depicted excellently!

by velleman Homepage »

Nov 5, 2011 10:16:24 pm
excellent :-)

by mapps Homepage »

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