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Don't take me for Granted (rewrite)

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Member Since Jul 6, 2004
87 Images, Last upload Jun 23, 2012

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I've got something to say
but I don't quite know how
If you lost me today
I'd be there somehow

Don't take me for granted

I'm not what I seem
I hide in the shadows

. . . . . lost in a dream

You're all I've ever had
and everything I need
and when things get really bad
It's your blood I bleed


Don't take me for granted

I'm not always around
But I wrote in the windows

. . . you missed what I found


Once I had lost you
I realized what's gone
In absence a love grew
I ran back before dawn

So don't take me for granted

I'll be here for now
I'll be there forever
. . . the same time somehow


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I was browsing through my gallery today for some inspiration and found this and Wolfspirit's comment that it was a little confusing and didn't flow very well. I agreed and rewrote it and personally reading the differences I can tell where I stood when I first wrote it and where I stand today. Certain things change in time, and certain things will never change. Well, still don't quite have the inspiration I need to write a new song, but this satisfies the creative soul for a few more hours.

The original can be read here:
http://www.renderosity.com/mod/gallery/index.php?image_id=1935484&user_id=280422&np&np
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August 2, 2010
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Aug 2, 2010 3:48:57 pm
''So don't take me for granted''

WORDS to LIVE by, indeed!

My BEST, TallPockets/brian

by TallPockets Homepage »

Nov 16, 2010 5:08:40 am
yeah, perfect.

by Wolfspirit Homepage »

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