(by the swat)
if one comes
says they know
(make'emup as yougo)
May 8, 2008 4:17:04 amby Chipka Online Now! Homepage »
Oooh, I like this immensely. There is a Czech writer, Lukas Tomin who captures many of the same qualities as this poem...he was a brilliant writer (in my opinion) and after being introduced to his work, I'm glad to see living artists producing pieces that strike a similar cord in me. Ah, your work is different than his, and in no way derivative...but I love the coincidental resonance here. Great stuff and I'm glad I saw it.