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Wide Naked Eye

se_400_Lux
Member Since Apr 30, 2006
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Contains Nudity
(I need a shave)

fiddling in the dark
reaching for the slot

found my way this morning
after trancing around
halfassleep
thinking about
all those yesterdays futures

chocolate cake and
ice cream treats
after much white zin
squeezing grapes
up late
alamode
clicking spoons held up
miniature fencing matches between bites
plates on our bellies
nibbles licks
tou-che(s)
sticky ears
folds
skins
crumbs
through the night

you
on your stomach
as I cross the room
by this morning light
shadows and curves
your lines
stir
me...

brushing teeth
remembering
(contains nudity) tag
as we laughed
outloud

grackled cackled
crackled hooped and hollered
at the world
at nobody
at us
with all
this crazy
visual realm
we exist/live in

it is not
who
you are
but
more at
what you :

look at
look like
look you!

you
sees/seens/seems
that defines
that defiles
that defies
as all it all goes...







again

once again with
that bright refrain
with tilts and spins

again

ancient distant
cyclic pains with burden
clear strings and strains

again

gripping
constant intense the pain
cannot explain

again

grabbing
tearing apart confused
drained weakness remains

then
again

as sunshine
that arrives
after heavy rains

all
again

this too
shall pass
as the way abides

kindness allow
lay all aside
pass through
as a screen
all attached

all things return
to recount try again
until the right and proper turn

once
again

from longbefore

"...work out
your own salvation
with diligence..."

rings thru

again











Big Sky

large days
with
large nights

large
skylight
on the slant
of this old cabin
roof

first light
stirs
focus

not moving
much
prone
from good sleep
see:

Trapper Peak
from my pallet
morning chill
by the cold
faded fire
framed
all for me
provided

muchlater

moving around
hike up bythe creek
in
mountain air

afternoon
stretching out
on by the outgrowths
along/by the Bitterroots


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no misgivings
with
no regrets

pain
is living

suffering
is a given

the price
is due

as the train
always
nears the station











the mentally ill

has until now,
referred to
individuals within a culture
not considered
having normal development

if your god is
not willing

what happens

can a whole culture
be mentally ill

some will say :
if it can be imagined...



















replicant

Roy Batty talking about
Being near the Tannhauser Gate
An area where
Distance is nil
Here to there the same
Lightyears, boom
There

Roy Batty
Wanting to meet
To meet
His maker
And
To ask

To ask some things...

Why?
and
Can I repent?
and
Can you extend my stay?

"All those...moments will be lost in time
...like... tears in the rain..."






Orgullo
(you must figure)

toma todo

pride is so
all-encompassing
so total
that
you sometimes
miss
the obvious
the sublime
the loneliness'

outline
in the rain
mirrored with pain
on the drops
those energies
with continuance transcending

constant transform



quiet please

some thing died
yesterday

gone
back into the mix

that strong energy
those multiple vibes
with styles and spins
now and again
coming back
many numerous energies
combined
thrown
at the world
at us
at all of us

those brightprides
those orgullos
that play
upon our individual
spins




Paul is Dead


how much of the word(s)
is the word
actual
ONLY

as
you cannot
hear
these words
empirically

yourself
to the originator
ascanbeheard
cancelled

long ago
when I knew everything

an old man was saying
after just using
in conversation
the word - yesterday

"...let's get back to that word -- yes-tee-dee...

Like in - How - dee!

Yes-tee-dee !

Not -- yes-ter-day?

He was from?

English I believe

Another country

SingSong round here
Not sound right

"yes-tee-dee"

~

this in no way mocks
or attempts(on any level)
to ridicule any person
people
place
thing

only
to describe with words

this voice
voices
here now
you create




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Jan 19, 2008 2:14:44 pm
Again , sublime !
Ana

by amlondono Homepage »

Jan 21, 2008 8:39:27 pm
I particularly like the part about chocolate cake.imaginative writing

by Richardphotos Homepage »

Mar 2, 2008 8:32:36 am
I'd really like to comment thoroughly though I'm somewhat thrown by the word 'abstract' as applied to poetry [or any other kind of writing].

Please understand that this is NOT some kind of 'sideways snipe' but a genuine request for information.

Certainly I can say that I enjoyed immensely your clever word usage in general and word-play in particular, and that I found your refreshingly literate work to be engaging and entertaining by turns.

Maybe that's enough to say.

Mike

by meico Online Now!   Homepage »

Mar 3, 2008 3:05:49 am

My understanding:

Genre: Abstract

Genre(n., kind,sort,gender): A composition made up of a particular style, form or of certain content

Abstract(adj.,not specific): Away from clear, well-defined, conventional method(s)


Better choice:

Concrete Poetry: unconventional arrangement of words and the use of symbols, visuals and graphic word-patterns.


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*Thanks for your comments.

I keep coming back to Renderosity because the gallery layout is just right for allowing me to put my spin on Concrete Poetry.

Genre: Concrete Poetry
(should be a choice)



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