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TWO LOVERS TWO LIARS

vaggabondd
Member Since Nov 21, 2005
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TWENTY-FIVE YEARS
WHERE DID IT ALL GO

NOT MUCH TO SAY
AS THEY LOOK UP AT EACH OTHER
AND GIVE A OCCASIONAL SMILE

A LITTLE SMALL TALK OVER DESERT
SHE DOES THE DISHES
HE TURNS ON THE NEWS

UP TO BED
A SIMPLE I LOVE YOU
A PECK ON THE LIPS
THEY WRAP UP IN THEIR COVERS
AND TURN BACK TO BACK

THEIR HEARTS ARE BOTH BREAKING
THEIR SOULS ARE ACHING
DAYDREAMING OF SOMEONE ELSE

THEY ARE BOTH IN LOVE WITH ANOTHER
BUT NEITHER ONE KNOWS HOW TO TELL THE OTHER
SO EVERY NIGHT ITS THE SAME THING

TWO LOVERS
TWO LIARS
LIVING IN PAIN




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Jan 26, 2007 8:10:17 am
mmm... Very heavy poem this one me finks. Great work once again, Mr. Vaggabondd

by Zeldie Homepage »

Jan 26, 2007 8:12:46 am
How true mine was 29 years but no peck on the lips,and no I love you, just pure resentment, till a door opened and I went through it

by PatNoone Homepage »

Jan 26, 2007 8:36:15 am
Sad but excellent poem ... Very well done !!!

by violet Homepage »

Jan 26, 2007 10:54:30 am
Excellent poem,glad its not that way here!!

by Primal Homepage »

Jan 26, 2007 11:57:19 am
Wow, nice poem

by hipps13 Homepage »

Jan 26, 2007 12:55:28 pm
So touching, heartbreaking... incredible poem, just beautiful! ^^

by colynn Homepage »

Jan 26, 2007 3:44:06 pm
Heavy stuff, to bad it's all to often true.

by A2J2001 Homepage »

Jan 26, 2007 8:46:27 pm
beautiful and straight to the point. Love it!!

by D.C.Monteny Homepage »

Jan 29, 2007 4:49:19 pm
Such riches and eloquence in such an economical use of words. It breaks the heart of this old broad, it is the type of story which touches every heart that beats. Thanks BJ

by mamabobbijo Homepage »

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