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THE SUBWAY

by vaggabondd, member since Nov 21, 2005 (homepage)
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Uploaded: November 21, 2006
Gallery: Writers
Genre: Romance

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I AM SIPPING A HOT CUP OF COFFEE WHEN THE SUBWAY PULLS IN. I TOSS MY CUP IN THE GARBAGE CAN AND MAKE A DASH FOR A SEAT. NO SUCH LUCK. TOO MANY PEOPLE WHO ARE SO HARDENED THAT IT DOESN�T BOTHER THEM AT ALL TO BE RUDE. I GRAB A POLL AND HANG ON. ALL IS NOT BAD. STANDING ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE POLE IS A BEAUTIFUL BRUNETTE. I GIVE A CASUAL SMILE TRYING NOT TO LOOK LIKE I AM STARING AT HER AND BELIEVE ME I WAS. THEN THE TRAIN LUNGES FORWARD AND MY LIFE IS NEVER THE SAME AGAIN.
THE LUNGE JERKS ME FORWARD AND MY NOSE SMASHES INTO THE POLE I AM HOLDING ON TO. MY EYES ARE WATERING. IT REALLY HURT. THEN I FEEL A SLIGHT TRICKLE OF BLOOD RUNNING OUT MY NOSE AND ACROSS MY LIPS. BEFORE I CAN GET A HANDKERCHIEF THE TRAIN COMES SCREAMING TO A HOLT. I TRY TO HOLD MY SELF BUT I FALL FACE FORWARD RIGHT INTO THIS INCREDIBLY BEAUTIFUL WOMAN�S BREAST. THE ARE ROUND AND HARD AS A ROCK AND SHE SMELLS SO NICE. WHEN THE TRAIN COMES TO A COMPLETE STOP I PULL MY SELF OFF OF HER EVEN THOUGH I REALLY DIDN�T WANT TO. SHE HAD A LITTLE BLOOD RIGHT IN THE CENTER OF HER BLOUSE. I TOLD HER I WAS SORRY AND SHE SAID THAT�S ALRIGHT I LIKED IT. STANDING THERE STUNNED FOR A SECOND THE DOORS OPENED UP AND EVERYONE FOUGHT TO GET OFF THE TRAIN AS THE OTHERS FOUGHT TO GET ON AT THE SAME TIME. WHEN THE CROWD CLEARED I LOOKED ALL AROUND AND SHE WAS GONE. ITS BEEN 2 YEARS AND I STILL LOOK FOR HER EVERYDAY BUT SHE IS NEVER THERE. I DON�T KNOW IF I WILL EVER SEE HER AGAIN. BUT IN THE MOMENT WITH A SMILE AND A FEW SOFT WORDS SHE STOLE MY HEART FOREVER.

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	by vaggabondd (online now) on Nov 21, 2006 12:42:59 am [homepage] I AM HAVING WRITES BLOCK AGAIN IN MY POETRY SO I THOUGHT I WOULD TRY MY HAND AT A LITTLE ROMANCE STORY. I HOPE EVERYONE LIKES IT. IT IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT THIS KIND OF WRITING.

	by Primal on Nov 21, 2006 1:32:35 am [homepage] I hate it when that happens..Excellent story..!

	by Merrylee on Nov 21, 2006 1:45:14 am [homepage] Not bad Randy, different, but I like it.

	by Valerie-Ducom on Nov 21, 2006 1:12:09 pm [homepage] Oh yes, beautiful story!!! Thanks... Good day ;)

	by mamabobbijo on Nov 21, 2006 4:28:09 pm [homepage] I love little first person anecdotes. No embellishments just the facts of the story. An easy read. Sorry she remains so elusive. Thanks for sharing BJ

	by romanceworks on Nov 21, 2006 9:34:01 pm [homepage] In romance the guy ultimately gets the girl so perhaps there is still hope of a happy ending. Enjoyed your story very much. CC

	by A2J2001 on Nov 22, 2006 6:27:32 pm [homepage] Not bad. The writers block will pass.