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THE SUBWAY

vaggabondd
Member Since Nov 21, 2005
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I AM SIPPING A HOT CUP OF COFFEE WHEN THE SUBWAY PULLS IN. I TOSS MY CUP IN THE GARBAGE CAN AND MAKE A DASH FOR A SEAT. NO SUCH LUCK. TOO MANY PEOPLE WHO ARE SO HARDENED THAT IT DOESNíT BOTHER THEM AT ALL TO BE RUDE. I GRAB A POLL AND HANG ON. ALL IS NOT BAD. STANDING ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE POLE IS A BEAUTIFUL BRUNETTE. I GIVE A CASUAL SMILE TRYING NOT TO LOOK LIKE I AM STARING AT HER AND BELIEVE ME I WAS. THEN THE TRAIN LUNGES FORWARD AND MY LIFE IS NEVER THE SAME AGAIN.
THE LUNGE JERKS ME FORWARD AND MY NOSE SMASHES INTO THE POLE I AM HOLDING ON TO. MY EYES ARE WATERING. IT REALLY HURT. THEN I FEEL A SLIGHT TRICKLE OF BLOOD RUNNING OUT MY NOSE AND ACROSS MY LIPS. BEFORE I CAN GET A HANDKERCHIEF THE TRAIN COMES SCREAMING TO A HOLT. I TRY TO HOLD MY SELF BUT I FALL FACE FORWARD RIGHT INTO THIS INCREDIBLY BEAUTIFUL WOMANíS BREAST. THE ARE ROUND AND HARD AS A ROCK AND SHE SMELLS SO NICE. WHEN THE TRAIN COMES TO A COMPLETE STOP I PULL MY SELF OFF OF HER EVEN THOUGH I REALLY DIDNíT WANT TO. SHE HAD A LITTLE BLOOD RIGHT IN THE CENTER OF HER BLOUSE. I TOLD HER I WAS SORRY AND SHE SAID THATíS ALRIGHT I LIKED IT. STANDING THERE STUNNED FOR A SECOND THE DOORS OPENED UP AND EVERYONE FOUGHT TO GET OFF THE TRAIN AS THE OTHERS FOUGHT TO GET ON AT THE SAME TIME. WHEN THE CROWD CLEARED I LOOKED ALL AROUND AND SHE WAS GONE. ITS BEEN 2 YEARS AND I STILL LOOK FOR HER EVERYDAY BUT SHE IS NEVER THERE. I DONíT KNOW IF I WILL EVER SEE HER AGAIN. BUT IN THE MOMENT WITH A SMILE AND A FEW SOFT WORDS SHE STOLE MY HEART FOREVER.
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November 21, 2006
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Nov 21, 2006 12:42:59 am
I AM HAVING WRITES BLOCK AGAIN IN MY POETRY SO I THOUGHT I WOULD TRY MY HAND AT A LITTLE ROMANCE STORY. I HOPE EVERYONE LIKES IT. IT IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT THIS KIND OF WRITING.

by vaggabondd Homepage »

Nov 21, 2006 1:32:35 am
I hate it when that happens..Excellent story..!

by Primal Homepage »

Nov 21, 2006 1:45:14 am
Not bad Randy, different, but I like it.

by Merrylee Homepage »

Nov 21, 2006 1:12:09 pm
Oh yes, beautiful story!!! Thanks... Good day ;)

by Valerie-Ducom Homepage »

Nov 21, 2006 4:28:09 pm
I love little first person anecdotes. No embellishments just the facts of the story. An easy read. Sorry she remains so elusive. Thanks for sharing BJ

by mamabobbijo Homepage »

Nov 21, 2006 9:34:01 pm
In romance the guy ultimately gets the girl so perhaps there is still hope of a happy ending. Enjoyed your story very much. CC

by romanceworks Homepage »

Nov 22, 2006 6:27:32 pm
Not bad. The writers block will pass.

by A2J2001 Homepage »

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