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Piano Man

vaggabondd
Member Since Nov 21, 2005
1309 Images, Last upload Sep 17, 2014

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Slowly the rain drips
On the brim of my hat
As I play our song
On the piano
In the park
In the dark
Thinking of you

Blood drips
From my finger tips
Staining the keys
With your memories
Of our first kiss
Our last kiss
And everything in between

What drives me insane
Is the pain
That comes
From me loving you
And you, not loving me

I wish you had another
I wish I was fighting a lover
But its just me
You just donít love me

So when you walk bye
And see tears in my eyes
Donít you dare pity me
Just leave me alone
Tickling the ivoryís
With my memories
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November 3, 2006
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Nov 3, 2006 11:50:33 am
I think this one reads a lot better if you read it just a little fast. see what you think and let me know. I hope everyone likes it.

by vaggabondd Homepage »

Nov 3, 2006 1:25:13 pm
Yes I like your words my friend, you know to touch the heart with only few words and it's a lot of Art!!! Good day ;)

by Valerie-Ducom Homepage »

Nov 3, 2006 1:52:59 pm
Sweet love....always is sweet, even when is TERRIBLE!!! Ha, ha...! Love your poem!*****

by Sekadhar Homepage »

Nov 3, 2006 6:49:47 pm
I think it's tragicly sad, and touchingly beautiful! Economic but, so effective use of words! Thanks, BJ

BTW was there an image, instead of that red X ? B

by mamabobbijo Homepage »

Nov 3, 2006 10:19:27 pm
Yea, I like it. It makes you think. Those are the best ones.

by A2J2001 Homepage »

Nov 4, 2006 10:43:46 am
Excellent, very touching, bravo!!

by gingerlou Homepage »

Nov 4, 2006 4:50:07 pm
Hi,

You took me with your words back to my teenage days when I had a crush over an older boy who barely noticed me...

I like poems that are simple and use strong words.

May I draw your attention to a typo - last stanza, first line - should be
WALK BY and not BYE.

Thanks for sharing

Hanna



by WiseHanna Homepage »

Nov 6, 2006 10:49:42 am
Excellent nice job...

by kutiepiee Homepage »

Nov 6, 2006 8:36:05 pm
Nice poem.

by Merrylee Homepage »

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