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Her not so secret, secret lover

vaggabondd
Member Since Nov 21, 2005
1310 Images, Last upload Dec 9, 2014

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I look over the top of the paper
You are blowing the steam
Off your coffee cup
I look in your eyes
You’re not looking at me
You are looking through me
Someone else’s reflection
Is in your eyes
As I am walking out the door
You kiss my cheek
And say you love me
But I know better
I want to scream
Do you know how much you are hurting me
Do you even care
As I am driving away
I know he will soon be there
I want to confront you
But I am afraid
If I bring everything out in the open
You will have no reason to pretend
So I keep my mouth shut
And pray
That your not so secret
Secret lover
Moves away
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October 5, 2006
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Oct 5, 2006 9:36:22 pm
Very nice poem. Very touching.

by Merrylee Homepage »

Oct 6, 2006 1:17:12 am
Very heavy writing. You get the sorrow across really well!!

by RubyT Homepage »

Oct 6, 2006 2:49:10 am
An enjoyable read Vaggabond.
A well constructed poem delivered masterfully.

Sammy

by DreamweaverNZ Homepage »

Oct 6, 2006 9:36:54 am
Excellent peotry,hope its not hitting to close to home on this one!!

by Primal Homepage »

Oct 6, 2006 10:53:18 am
excellent poem. very moving!!!!!!! :)

by kutiepiee Homepage »

Oct 7, 2006 10:28:48 pm
Glad I know your wife loves you. It's a very good poem.

by A2J2001 Homepage »

Oct 9, 2006 10:48:51 am
Beautiful poem...warm! Super!!!

by Sekadhar Homepage »

Oct 14, 2006 6:59:19 am
Very well written work!!

by TallPockets Homepage »

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