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Her tan line

vaggabondd
Member Since Nov 21, 2005
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I saw her walking the beach
Golden brown tan
A modest two piece bikini
If there is such a thing
Covered her just enough
To drive you crazy
Without seeming easy
I mustered up the courage to start talking to her
She is very funny
And bright
She knew so much about so much
She liked sports and politics
She was perfect
All night long
Tossing and turning
I could not sleep
As bright as she was
And all the fun that we had
The only thing on my mind
Was her tan line
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Apr 27, 2006 5:03:29 pm
I like your easy-going style.Well written and concludes tightly.

by Margana Homepage »

Apr 27, 2006 5:10:52 pm
I like this, it reads well and it has an honesty about it that is most refreshing.

by mystmaiden Homepage »

May 2, 2006 5:28:17 am
Ha ha ha ha. Great honest poem about first impressions.. ;o)

by SusiQ Homepage »

Jul 14, 2006 6:57:42 am
LOL Typical male huh?!? Lovely poem!

by Zeldie Homepage »

Oct 3, 2009 3:23:02 am
Well my friend, consider my eyes rolled in a feminine fashion. Great lead in to the punch line! Very well (and very male) said!

by myrrhluz Homepage »

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