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vaggabondd
Member Since Nov 21, 2005
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I see you standing there with him
My whole body aches
Iím fighting the tears
I want to hold you so bad
I can feel you in my arms
I remember holding you
While you laughed
We rolled around on the grass
And made love
We always made love
I can remember your every curve and bump
I can still taste the smell of your skin
When I was awake you were my dream
When I was asleep you were my peace
What went wrong
Why did you leave
What do I have to do
Iím begging you please
Please
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Apr 25, 2006 2:44:29 pm
Beautiful!!! A little lass in North Yorkshire. UK Hears these words, excellent.

by rainbows Homepage »

Apr 26, 2006 2:03:06 am
The trials of love are painful. If it was meant to be, he'll be back. You need to ask yourself though - do you really want him back knowing his weakness for others? Lovely emotive work.

by SusiQ Homepage »

Apr 27, 2006 5:18:53 pm
This is wonderful.I really love the honesty.I find especially great these two lines..."When I was awake you were my dream
When I was asleep you were my peace."The only thing that jumps out at me is the word 'bump'.It isn't a very attractive sounding word when describing someone's body.Just my two cents.Hope you don't mind,because I really think this is great.-M :^)

by Margana Homepage »

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