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SPARKLING STAR IN THE SKY

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SPARKLING STAR IN THE SKY

TELL ME THE TRUTH

IN A LIE

TELL ME HOW I REALLY AM

BUT DONíT LET MY PRESTIGE BE DAMNED

TELL ME THE TRUTH

BUT GENTLY PLEASE

TELL ME THE TRUTH

BUT TELL ME WITH LEA

SPARKLING STAR IN THE SKY

TELL ME THE TRUTH

IN A LIE
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Feb 3, 2006 3:53:39 pm
Excellent writing! I love this line "TELL ME THE TRUTH IN A LIE".

by NothingNess Homepage »

Feb 5, 2006 3:50:05 pm
That's certainly true to human nature; "Tell me the truth in a lie." This poem really resonated with me.

BUT DONíT LET MY PRESTIGE BE DAMNED
However, I don't think "damned" flows right in the poem. I would personally change it to "damaged." I think it flows better.

Anyways, nice work:)

by Touchstone_Fire Homepage »

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